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Re: 2216
Hmm, this story is lacking something and I can't quite put my finger on it. Firstly the beginning at times, sounded a bit strange. For example, "Blow out the candles.." ...
Oct 19, 2009 -
Re: Memoirs of a Monster: A Fictional Tale of Nazi Germany
Great prologue! You have me gripped already! I love the emotions you describe, they're very deep and at the same time terrifying. I'm really looking forward to reading more. It ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Lies and Love...
I'm going to be honest and I hope you won't take this to heart. Firstly the beginning made it seem like a blurb of a story book I don't know ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Flight: un-retirement chapter one: Briefing
Let me start off by saying I too had the same fear you had. I NEVER let ANYONE ready my work because I was scared that it sounded rubbish but ...
Oct 16, 2009 -
Re: Us
Let me start off by saying this is really good so far and I look forward to reading more. I just have one thing to touch on. It's always good ...
Oct 16, 2009