*Twilight*

This seems like it will be pretty thrilling in the next couple of chapters. I love suspense I think that suspense it key to thrillers because thrillers don't ues blood ...

This is still going strong. The description is very well done and all of the earleir events are tying together nicely. I like the details of his transformation too the ...

I love anything paranormal it is sort of a magnet to me I can't stay away from this stuff. I'm quite familiar with shamans so the story wasn't confusing to ...

It's not ignorant to ask someone if they will continue a piece of work! (It's a perfectly logical question to ask, in fact ) Once "The Great Hammer of Inspiration" ...

Kyle stared vilely back at her as if she was Darth Vader himself. This right here was my favorite line. I loved it. That is the reason I like your ...

made him feel very small, like a spec of dirt on a squished ant. I like the way you use unique descriptions I've never heard of this one before. I ...

Bravo Halloween, I loved it! The reason I like this is because it consists of four things that I like in a story. 1: Suspense 2: The lack of big ...

This was pretty good. I can't give you a comment concerning the style of your story and the style of hitchhikers guide because I've never read the book I havent ...

I really liked this. For some reason I love stories placed in dark mysterious places and I love suspense. (Which is exactly why I'm such a huge m.night shamalyn fan) ...