*DaughteroftheMoon*

She is my phoenix, rising from the ashes of an old year, ak past life, a neglected child. She There are some spelling mistakes here. ak should probably be a. ...

Salem, Massachusetts November 5, 1692 The Salem Witch Trials. Interesting, its a time that I have studied into. Branches whipped her face, arms and legs as she ran. The roughened, ...

This poem is really short. I get the jest of it, but I think that you could develop this a bit more. You're basically saying the same message every line. ...

You have some great rhythm and flow in this poem. There were a few spelling mistakes that have already been mentioned. I care for you tirelessly When sickness siezes; For ...

Okay, here goes. You could write this poem with stanzas or you could keep it the way you have it. Either way its your choice and it works. Its could ...