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  • Mageheart
    Apr 13, 2017

    Happy birthday!~ I hope you have a wonderful day that's filled with joy - you definitely deserve it! ☆


    coehl definitely months late but thank you so much! <3
    Jun 13, 2017

  • to those who have reviewed my works and such, what feedback or critique do you guys want to say to me? i want to keep it on this post because reading critiques on different stuff i've written can get a little messy for me, so please, if you have any critique or feedback for me, please comment down below!!!

    thanks darlings!

  • i've been told that many people say that i am a "good writer". while those compliments are flattering and the support means a lot, i've always questioned,

    "What makes a good writer?"

    if youve got any comments or opinions for this question feel free to comment down below. ive always wanted to see other people's views.


    Mea To me, a good or at least competent writer is someone who can tell an engaging story from beginning to end. While the genres and tropes readers like are very subjective, in general you can tell if a book "works" or not by whether its plot and pacing hold together, and if it fulfills on the promises it made to the reader at the beginning of the story.

    I think fulfilling the promises made to the reader is the most important part of storytelling and a really good concept to be aware of. Basically, when a reader picks up the book, the beginning sets their expectations for that book - is it romance, fantasy, mystery, is it likely to have a happy ending, what kind of story is this? That's why a lot of the time you need to edit the beginning the most. And to be a good book, and for the writer to be a good writer, they need to deliver on those promises (although sometimes pulling off a big reversal of them can work too.)

    Feb 16, 2017


    coehl @Mea interesting and i do agree with you. I don't think I'd be satisfied with reading a terrible beginning and then having a decent ending follow up with it. I'm just asking this since I'm planning to add some short stories into my stuff and I want to be aware of what some other people would think of a good story would be. Thanks for your reply!
    Feb 16, 2017

  • Hi guys it's been a year since ive been on here and i kinda miss it. the reason why i wasnt on for a year is because i eventually got bored, got overwhelmed with school, and just found myself saying that i have no use here. also i happened to forget my YWS password lol

    but anyhow thatll change, im going to try to upload just a small amount.
    other than that, im back, i guess


    KaiRyu Oh nice. XD Glad you be back!! :D
    Feb 15, 2017


    coehl @KaiRyu thanks darling it feels alright coming back
    Feb 15, 2017

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  • i apologize for being inactive everybody, i have just now gotten bored with YWS and again i apologize and ive also been drawing more frequently so i often forget to post on here. again im terribly sorry!!


    KaiRyu :O!!!!!!! How could you get bored?!?!?!?!
    Mar 18, 2016


    coehl i just do, i havent been able to publish stuff so uh yeah
    Mar 22, 2016

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  • KaiRyu
    Feb 3, 2016

    :P


    coehl :^)
    Feb 3, 2016

  • tfw youre talking bout math


  • KaiRyu
    Feb 2, 2016

    (I used tripple swag!!);)


    coehl im proud of you!
    Feb 2, 2016


  • KaiRyu
    Feb 2, 2016

    Hey Paul!:):):):):):):):):)


    coehl hey kai u v u
    Feb 2, 2016

  • hey guys check out the new drabble/short story from one of my beloved best friends in real life , @XPresidentTurtlesX that we wrote together!! hope u enjoy some angsty romance : ^ D


  • SuperAnimalCrossing
    Jan 3, 2016

    Happy late New Year you nerd!


    coehl You too you dork!! B ^ )))
    Jan 3, 2016

  • Happy New Year to you all, let's all have a good one!

  • Happy Holidays to you all!! <33


  • PenguinAttack
    Dec 15, 2015

    Congrats on that review star! :D


    coehl thank you!!
    Dec 15, 2015

  • THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR THE LOVE AND SUPPORT, AND I DONT KNOW WHY MY WORK IS SHOWN ONCE IN THE SPOTLIGHT, BUT THANK YOU ALL SO MUcsdsjakdhs!!!!!


    CRIES,
    COEHL

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    deleted21 Relax! xD That was pretty awesome! :D
    Dec 11, 2015


    coehl i still cant loooool
    Dec 11, 2015



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