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  • Butterfly18
    Mar 14, 2013

    Hey, RenGrey. Just posted Chapter One of Science Fiction Novel. The working title is Elara.

    Here it is.

    work.php?id=100314

    Thought you might like to read. :)


  • Butterfly18
    Feb 28, 2013

    Hey RenGrey. Been ages.

    How have you been?

    I have a blog now. :) Launched it today.

    http://artistsparkblog.wordpress.com/

    Check it out. I'll be posting book and film reviews and also free fiction soon. :)

    I will be posting drafts of that fiction to YWS soon too. I'm going to write chapter one of a fantasy story later today. :) I'll let you know when I post it on here and I'd love some feedback from you. :)


    RenGrey I've been well thank you. Indeed it has been ages! It's lovely to hear from you! That's awesome I look foward to checking out your blog and reading your work!
    Mar 4, 2013


  • Butterfly18
    Aug 31, 2012

    hey nah I wasn't wanting you to review anything. Just wanted to know how you've been. :)
    So how you been, RenGrey?

    I've been working on notes and things for my 3rd draft of First Light. I want this to be the second last if not last draft i have to do of it, so I'm doing a lot of thinking on it. Probably the rest of the year haha. So I can get it straight. Because I sort of belted out 2 drafts in a year and I think taking a year t educate myself more and get all my research done will be good. So you probably won't see any of that story on here any time soon.

    I will be writing some short stories soon. I want to try and hone my skills and they're the best way to do so. So I'll let you know when I've posted one of those. Until then, how are you doing and have you posted anything new lately?

    How's that story going about the girl who wakes up in a hospital and doesn't remember anything? I think that's how it goes. :)


    RenGrey Sounds like youre on a roll :) with me things have been rather hellish and I haven't had time to write much, and it saddens me. Honors classes and prep for senior year and college have been well within my grasp though instead of a full mind and empty paper with sharpened pencils. And an emergency today has cast most ideas aside. :/ I hope to get back on to writing again even at risk of sleep :)
    Sep 13, 2012


  • HorriBliss
    Aug 14, 2012

    Thank you very much for the review :D
    I hope to write more soon-ish, but there's too much that goes on at my house that virtually makes 'peace and quiet' a forlorn possibilty!
    Lord of The Rings fan, eh? I'm on The Two Towers; reading it for my first time :D


    RenGrey Ha yes, indeed I am it is incredible! Do continue reading - have you picked up to Hobbit yet?
    Aug 24, 2012


  • Butterfly18
    Aug 13, 2012

    Hey I'm good how are you?


    RenGrey Doing really well thank you. How is your writing going?
    Aug 13, 2012

  • Like or Comment on my Status and I will be more than happy to review a specific work


    HorriBliss There's just the one piece from me, if you don't mind:
    "Turning my Back" - although it's dark in nature, so be warned :P

    Aug 13, 2012


    RenGrey Sure thing :) I don't mind at all
    Aug 13, 2012


  • Butterfly18
    Jun 22, 2012

    Hey how have you been? Good I hope. :) How's your stories coming along?

    I've submitted a short story. You might be interested. Would love a review.

    work.php?id=96044

    :)


    RenGrey Hello there, sorry for the late reply. I've been rather busy so I haven't been able to log on for a while. But here I am! I would love to send a review your way :) I hope you are doing well
    Jul 14, 2012


    RenGrey And I've taken rather...another hiatus as I have been busy with university searches. But alas I decided I would carve out the time to get tid-bits of writing done here and there. feel free to check out a few of the newer school plays I have written one is a comedy the other is meant to havea more serious tone. And I've had a dream that seems sure to spark some new creative work :) And how is yours?
    Jul 14, 2012

  • Why do YOU write?


    Butterfly18 It's an urge, a habit, a unrelenting need to create.
    Jun 22, 2012


  • Butterfly18
    Mar 19, 2012

    Hey, RenGrey.
    Thanks so much for your review on, Bullets.

    It's set sometime in near future Earth. Not too far into the future, which is why its so raw and they don't use any high-tech gadgets or anything.

    And, I actually wrote it for a competition, MOD 2. It's an anthology that gets published with a collection of short stories based on the same premise.

    The premise is that there's this machine that through a blood test, can tell you exactly how you're going to die, and it's never wrong.

    Admittedly the premise wasn't heavily impacting the story as I think it should have, which is one of the factors I think in why it didn't get considered for the anthology.

    I did re-write it though because I liked the idea of it and I posted it cos I though people might like it.

    I'm glad you enjoyed reading. And thanks again for the review, I appreciate it so much.

    You posted anything as of late?

    :)


    RenGrey No I have to, but I belive I will be updating soon since I recently (last of last night.) an idea slipped into my mind so I will probably post some scrap able version of my ideas
    Mar 19, 2012


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  • Butterfly18
    Mar 16, 2012

    Hey, RenGrey.
    How are you?
    I just posted a short story, and would love to know your opinion. :)

    work.php?id=94033


    RenGrey My pleasure, thank you for showing this it of work to me
    Mar 19, 2012


  • RenGrey
    Mar 4, 2012

    19 Days until The Hunger Games is released at the Cinema!!!!


    Stellabeam First it was Harry Potter, then Twilight and now the Hunger Games...why do I seem not to be as interested in these things as everyone else?
    Mar 4, 2012


    RenGrey I think it is all based on personal preference and perhaps none of them appeal to you. Neither Twilight nor Harry Potter appealed to me in the ways that it seemed to effect everyone else. I am only excited for I love to critique the movies and compare them to the book.
    Mar 4, 2012

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  • Butterfly18
    Mar 2, 2012

    Hello, RenGrey. Has been a little while. I haven't been on here the last few months because the layout of the site was so confusing to me. Haha.

    It's very simple to navigate once again and I'm back. How have you been?
    Get much writing done over Christmas or New Year?

    :)


    RenGrey Same here. XD but I have been well thank you. And yourself? Um a wrote quite an ensemble of poems - not much other lengthier bits except for school Unfortunatley. But alas. It is what it is how about you and your writing?
    Mar 4, 2012


    Butterfly18 It's been going okay. I'm studying right now so most of my writing is for college.
    But I'm getting more accustomed to writing short stories. I hope to post one soon.

    Mar 12, 2012

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  • RenGrey
    Feb 17, 2012

    Been a long time since I've been around - going to post some poems. Glad for the three day weekend.



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