Shakyll
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Happy birthday!~ I hope you have a wonderful day that's filled with joy because you definitely deserve it! ☆
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Okay. So I need someone to read my story, all 207 pages of it. It's not done yet, but I feel like it's not as good as I think it is. My older sister read it and really disliked it, but she's my sister so she's not going to really critique it...Loyalty, you know? So I need one, or several, of you to read it. Preferably an experienced writer who is not afraid to give critique. I need you to tell me exactly what you think. This would be a HUGE favor, and I would be forever in your debt.
Shakyll It's a fantasy-romance-action...Goblins and vampire elves and all that.
Mar 20, 2012
Blues You could try the novel workshop? Well. That's not available at the moment actually...
I'd do it, if I didn't have a NW Critique to do xD I don't mind having a look though, and then I can see what I can do?
Mar 21, 2012
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Skorpionne Don't be! I'm sure it's great, and if it isn't, then you'll be given a nice review to help you get better!
Mar 17, 2012
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Hi,
I have been following the story book you're in (Masked Resistance vs Aradian Tyranny) Or I was until my laptop died a few months ago, but I have a new one now. I've been playing catch up for a couple of days and just now read the post you posted on September 2. I simply had to tell you... it was awesome! You are very, very good with action scenes. I was quite impressed.
Amber
Shakyll thank you!! this totally made my day....i had no idea that i was that good with action scenes. They're the thing I struggle with the most xD
Dec 10, 2011
Amberla93 You're welcome, I am quite serious. You see, normally I multi-task, I'll read and chat, ect. But I read that whole entire post without stopping. I was captivated I guess you could say
Dec 11, 2011
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Everyone always tells us to stand up for what we believe in, no matter what. But why is it that when we do, (stand up for what we believe in) we get ridiculed, mocked, defriended, gossiped about, hated on. Ever wonder why I never comment on controversial works, such as stuff about gays or religion or pro-choice? You tell us to stand up for what we believe in, but apparently we should only when we know you'll agree with us. "Let's not rock the boat, please. I don't really want to be challenged on my beliefs, I just want to feel all warm and fuzzy inside when I tell you to be courageous and speak out." All this to say, usually it's no thanks, I'll stay sitting down. But maybe I'm wrong. So I'll give it a try. I believe in God, Jesus, and the Holy Spirit. I believe everything the Bible says. I believe marriage should be between a man and a woman and I believe abortion is the act of murder to a helpless innocent, and I believe dead baby jokes are unbelievably cruel and malicious. I am a follower of Christ but I hate "Christians" who make a habit of tearing people down and failing to demonstrate the love of Christ as well as His judgement. I will not criticize you, although I may disagree with you. I don't hate gays or lesbians, and I won't shun a lady who's had an abortion. I hate their choices, but I won't treat them with a judgmental attitude and I actively dislike those who do. But I will not condone their actions nor support them in their actions. I will try to dissuade them because of love and grace, in the way that God has shown me grace.
There, I've stood up for what I believe in. Prepare the dungeons for this narrow-minded, hating, judging oppressor. I don't expect anything different.
Shadowlight Amen to that!
Dec 8, 2011
qaralynn <3
Dec 8, 2011
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Mjdwrite Ah! I got the sheet music for that song!
Feb 3, 2012
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Shakyll Posted. Didn't have time to make a super long one :/
Nov 11, 2011
Redfang18 At least you got Masakka out of the cottage. Marcus is gonna give Morgan a little Darkrai family secret, now that Goldilocks is outside.
Nov 11, 2011
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