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  • Mageheart
    Mar 14, 2017

    Happy birthday!~ I hope you have a wonderful day that's filled with joy - you definitely deserve it! ☆

  • Hello Temi! Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. I am reading outloud for the assembly on day of silence (4/20) and I'm honestly really nervous. So where exactly do I lose some rhythm in my poem and what can I expand upon more to make this a stronger piece. I have made a few minor corrections in my recent editing but plesae let me know with either a post on my wall or a pm. Thanks :smt032


    Temi I am honestly sorry replying you now, as it questions my credibility as an effective member of yws. Schooling in Africa's hard and you can't get direct access to the internet. I hope the poem had a good effect! I do hope you accept my apology.
    Jul 22, 2012

  • It's good to be back!

  • Welcome back to YWS!!!!! :D good to have you back and see the... "smiling" face of your avatar ;)


    Temi Hahaha!! Thanks and it definitely feels good to be back!! Thanks again!
    Dec 11, 2011


  • MiaParamore
    Sep 10, 2011

    Thanks for the follow. Such a pretty name you have! :)


    Temi Thank you! I actually do like the combination of Mia and Paramore, sounds chic! =L
    Sep 12, 2011


    MiaParamore lol! Paramore is more of a surname than my crazy fanship for the band. :wink:
    Sep 12, 2011

  • Thanks for the follow, and thanks for the comment on my story, Temi! I'm glad you liked it. :)


  • 0o0Redrum0o0
    Aug 25, 2011

    Thanks for the advice and the review on Our Love! The way I write is poetry is my diary so the moods change depending on how I feel when I write them. I really have no "dark or light" way of writing. All my other poems I have on here are about death, so with me, you get poetry from both sides of the spectrum lol


    Temi Hahahaha! I see what you mean and I'm sorry. I can understand your point of view and I guess your lucky! Keep up the voice anyways!
    Aug 25, 2011


  • Boolovesyou
    Aug 18, 2011

    Thanks for the follow!


  • shiney1
    Aug 18, 2011

    Thanks for the follow!

  • Won't be on YWS for while! School here is hard and tough! Won't be on internet till the holidays. So bye for now.


  • MiRaCLeS
    Apr 21, 2011

    Thanks for the follow!


  • VousEsEtonnant
    Apr 20, 2011

    Hey! Welcome to YWS. thanks for your kind words! Also, (even though Im younger) if you ever need anything, let me know. Like a stalker for instance! :) just kidding. But really, we are here.

  • Thanks for the review! :)

  • Welcome!


  • GeeLyria
    Apr 16, 2011

    Thanks for the review! :)



Just think happy thoughts and you'll fly.
— Peter Pan