
Temi
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Hello Temi! Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. I am reading outloud for the assembly on day of silence (4/20) and I'm honestly really nervous. So where exactly do I lose some rhythm in my poem and what can I expand upon more to make this a stronger piece. I have made a few minor corrections in my recent editing but plesae let me know with either a post on my wall or a pm. Thanks
Temi I am honestly sorry replying you now, as it questions my credibility as an effective member of yws. Schooling in Africa's hard and you can't get direct access to the internet. I hope the poem had a good effect! I do hope you accept my apology.
Jul 22, 2012
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Welcome back to YWS!!!!!
good to have you back and see the... "smiling" face of your avatar
Temi Hahaha!! Thanks and it definitely feels good to be back!! Thanks again!
Dec 11, 2011
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Temi Thank you! I actually do like the combination of Mia and Paramore, sounds chic! =L
Sep 12, 2011
MiaParamore lol! Paramore is more of a surname than my crazy fanship for the band.
Sep 12, 2011
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Thanks for the follow, and thanks for the comment on my story, Temi! I'm glad you liked it.
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Thanks for the advice and the review on Our Love! The way I write is poetry is my diary so the moods change depending on how I feel when I write them. I really have no "dark or light" way of writing. All my other poems I have on here are about death, so with me, you get poetry from both sides of the spectrum lol
Temi Hahahaha! I see what you mean and I'm sorry. I can understand your point of view and I guess your lucky! Keep up the voice anyways!
Aug 25, 2011
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Won't be on YWS for while! School here is hard and tough! Won't be on internet till the holidays. So bye for now.
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Hey! Welcome to YWS. thanks for your kind words! Also, (even though Im younger) if you ever need anything, let me know. Like a stalker for instance!
just kidding. But really, we are here.
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Mar 14, 2017