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  • When I first joined, I thought I needed harsh critiques to improve. I thought it was good for me and my craft.
    I've since realized that it's basically socially acceptable bullying from immature jerks who would rather protect their own egos by believing that they're simply elevating their field instead of examining themselves and realizing that it's much more constructive to take a step back and examine what the best way is to help someone build something.

    I visited an old piece out of nostalgia, and saw a comment that said you shouldn't like your own work. It's a pretentious and boring take. I'm going to go back through and like everything.

    I'm pretty critical. I spot flaws even when I don't want to. I've also noticed, over the years, that people tend to get better if they just keep writing. It doesn't matter if they get the "right" feedback or not, so long as they just keep writing, reading, and internalizing the rules. If you have nothing nice to say, and you just leave them alone, most of the time they will eventually get better.

    People are more likely to do this when they're motivated. People are more likely to be motivated when they're encouraged.

    Liking your own work is a minor blip that doesn't materially affect anything in any way. Be your own biggest supporter if you want. There's plenty of others who are ready and willing to tear you down.

  • I love that you guys remembered my birthday! I don't even know who is who anymore. It really warms my heart.


    IcyFlame <3
    May 25, 2022


    Caerulean :o Happy Birthday!
    May 25, 2022


  • MailicedeNamedy
    May 22, 2022

    Happy Birthday!!! :D 🎂


    fireheartedkaratepup Thank you! 😊
    May 25, 2022


  • winterwolf0100
    May 22, 2022

    Happy birthdayyy!!


    fireheartedkaratepup Thanks!!
    May 25, 2022


  • Mageheart
    May 22, 2022

    Happy birthday~! 🍰


    fireheartedkaratepup Thank you!
    May 25, 2022


  • looseleaf
    Apr 3, 2022

    happy cake day!


    fireheartedkaratepup YISSS
    May 25, 2022


  • fatherfig
    Apr 3, 2022

    happy yewisaversary


    fireheartedkaratepup Thanks for remembering!
    May 25, 2022

  • Forcing myself to just type something out and post it doesn't always work, because then I'm like "I hate it" and then I don't want to write anything else for months.


  • fireheartedkaratepup
    Dec 5, 2021

    The voice of the dying calls out your name,
    they say "you could have saved us"


  • fireheartedkaratepup
    Dec 1, 2021

    I am KICKING myself for deleting some of my works, because 1) it didn't matter in the end and 2) I managed to lose one of my favorites.

    *claws at the databases* WHERE IS MY BEASTLY BEAUTY POEEEEMMMM

  • Me when I signed up for this website: ripping pieces apart is what reviewing is, right? I should do that. I should let people do that. Rip away!

    Me now: so many people rip everything to pieces. It's better to be constructive instead.


    IcyFlame Definitely all about the balance! Also, hi! <3
    Sep 27, 2021


  • fireheartedkaratepup
    Jan 5, 2021

    I'm not very proud of this but if you click it they will give me money.

    Running to the altar like a track star


    IcyFlame I will forever click things that give you money <3
    Feb 23, 2021


  • fireheartedkaratepup
    Nov 7, 2020

    Somoeny just blocked me for not wanting to mock a group that includes my former friends and members of my family and former communities.

    At least I wrote again for the first time in at least a year.


    fireheartedkaratepup I forgot how to indent so:
    I shouldn't be surprised, I saw the signs
    Drove by--I just wanted some company for the ride
    You slammed the door, I wondered why
    I traded a little bit of loneliness for something I knew would make me cry

    What now? Am I always gonna drive around
    Lonely
    Is there anyone who can
    Stay with me
    Without leaving dents?

    I knew how
    to keep myself safe, I just didn't know how
    to keep myself sane
    I keep driving down this road
    still don't know where to go

    Never been in an accident, but it would sure be nice if at least one of my friends
    would stick around for the ride
    Two roads diverge, every single time

    And I keep driving down this road
    Still don't know where to go


    I don't know if I want reviews, kind took that first phrase and really leaned into it. Idk.

    Nov 7, 2020


    Soulkana Fire <3<3 omg hiiii
    Nov 7, 2020

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  • LittleLee
    May 22, 2020

    Happy birthday!!!


    fireheartedkaratepup Blessit, I forgot to check here for a long time.

    Thank you.

    Nov 7, 2020


  • Mageheart
    May 22, 2020

    Happy birthday!


    fireheartedkaratepup Thank you!
    Nov 7, 2020



There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
— W. Somerset Maugham