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  • MailicedeNamedy
    Mar 11, 2022

    Happy Birthday!!! :D 🎂

  • Mageheart
    Mar 11, 2022

    Happy birthday! 🎂

  • momonster
    Mar 11, 2021

    Happy birthday!!

  • Mageheart
    Mar 11, 2020

    Happy birthday!

  • Mageheart
    Mar 11, 2019

    Happy birthday! <3

  • Mageheart
    Mar 11, 2018

    Happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day.

  • Random avatar
    Mar 11, 2017

    Happy birthday! :)

  • Mageheart
    Mar 11, 2017

    Happy birthday!~ I hope you have a wonderful day that's filled with joy - you definitely deserve it! ☆

  • confetti
    Oct 16, 2011

    Hey, thanks for the review!
    Actually, the twin towers were made to sway, I guess I already said that in my story, but for the record, they were indeed. I fixed the whole single plane, plural towers bit, and I'm glad you pointed that out, I hadn't even noticed! I suppose I could go back and add more description, but at the same time, it was a hectic, blurry, just completely irrational moment. Thanks again!

  • Twinkle4ever
    Aug 20, 2011

    Thank you for the comments. And it wasn't just you. The third picture does seem a bit dull. The scan didn't go that well. :)

  • EloquentDragon
    Aug 12, 2011

    heh heh heh. SQUEEEP!!!
    ...your avvie is hypnotic...

  • FemmeFatale
    Aug 4, 2011

    Thank you so much for your review on Swans: Useless. It really helped me alot. I left you a full reply on the same page answering to all of your comments (its under spoiler). Anywayn thnx again! :-)

  • WaywardBird
    Aug 2, 2011

    Break my heart, that's okay, because I still love you anway!

  • EliteHusky
    Aug 2, 2011

    Thank you for your comment. I look forward to reading from your portfolio.

  • Random avatar
    Aug 2, 2011

    Thanks for your review, I appreciate it. But there are a few things I forgot to mention. The first thing is, everything is symbolic, so shooting people isn't nasty. It symbolising praying for them because in the first Act it mentions Prayer arrows. And the women are supposed to represent temptation. And the other thing is that this program is mainly for the purpose of teaching Christians that being a Christian isn't about 'Having Jesus fun' but about Spiritual Warfare. When writing it I was concentrating on Christians between 14 - 19. I wasn't thinking of a non-Christian audience

    And on the homosexual part of it, well okay so homosexuals may love each other. But you know, I can't compromise what I believe to be right. It's not nasty, because I'm not openly being nasty to them. Or putting them down in my script I'm just trying to show that Christians should be trying to save them as much as others from the strong hold of sin. Because this is a Christian script it will have a Christian view point of things. Not the ‘Holier than thou’ sort of Christians because that is not what Christianity is all about

A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.
— Roald Dahl