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  • SirenCymbaline
    Oct 28, 2012

    Audrey Hepburn!


  • SmylinG
    Jun 18, 2011

    Hey FRAYEDjade, just dropping a comment down to say I've recieved your review request and will try and get to it as soon as I can! Just so you don't think I'm slacking or anything. xD


  • 322sivart
    Jun 16, 2011

    Thanks. I'm debating whether or not to change it to George Carlin soon. I'm not sure, I've had this one for quite a while.


    FRAYEDjade I like Bill Cosby much better.
    Jun 16, 2011


  • FRAYEDjade
    Jun 16, 2011

    %!

  • Thank you, obviously that line about the head isn't literal. :)


    MUCHO By "broken villanelle" I just mean a villanelle that doesn't perfectly go with the format, I kind of cheated....if you don't know what a villanelle is, then ms. plath has a great one that turned me on to them called "mad girl's love song" this is kind of my "mad boy's love song"

    anyway, thanks for the review.

    Jun 8, 2011


    FRAYEDjade Well thanks for clarifying. I haven't actually read that poem, but it sounds interesting.
    Happy to oblige.

    Jun 8, 2011

  • Thanks! Glad there's yet another ATL fan on YWS :D


  • ErBear
    Apr 10, 2011

    I guess I'm okay with it. I can't see her as Katniss, but if the two guys dye their hair accordingly, they seem to be a good fit for Gale and Peeta. (:


    FRAYEDjade Yes, I like Katiss and Peeta. But Liam Hemsworth? Just not a fan.
    Apr 17, 2011


    ErBear Yes. Sometimes I think that he was just cast for publicity for the movie. He doesn't really have the charm that I pictured Gale to have, or the charming crooked smile.
    Apr 17, 2011


  • MeanMrMustard
    Mar 6, 2011

    Hey, I finished my review for Generation Y, take a look.


  • FRAYEDjade
    Feb 17, 2011

    Birthday. (:


  • TheAlphaBunny
    Jan 30, 2011

    Thank you for the review on my poem. ;} I'm glad that at least parts of it were taken well, and as for the gore...well, I'm a slightly morbid person, so it's jsut how I think. ^^' I understand it's not for everyone. Anyways, thank you again for taking the time to read it.
    Much loves,
    Bunny


  • Button
    Jan 9, 2011

    Thanks for the review- yeah... I'm really not crazy about that piece, haha.
    I wrote it a while ago, and it was structured in tanka, hence the barebones of it. :)

  • Love your avvie :D


  • lilymoore
    Dec 5, 2010

    *gets out the spray paint*

    Lily was here!

    You have no idea who I am, but I'm saying hello!


    FRAYEDjade You have no idea who I am either.
    Hello back at ya. (:

    Dec 17, 2010


  • ErBear
    Nov 26, 2010

    Hello! :D


    FRAYEDjade Oh, heyy.
    Nov 28, 2010


  • Flower~Child
    Oct 22, 2010

    Anytime, I'm glad it helped!



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