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The Interlude Chapter 2: The Scorpionis here!

In this chapter, Troy sneaks out of the palace to experience more of the outside world hoping to find some good or happiness amongst all the oppression.

@Liminality @IcyFlame @Rose

Hope you enjoy!
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Hello There!

The Interlude Chapter 1: Awakening is here!

This series of chapters is a short story set in the world of The Lie that Saved the World and serves as an Interlude between Part 1 and Part 2 with the aim of fleshing out the antagonists of the main story.

If you have not read previous chapters, there is quite a bit of context missing so here's an FYI on what you need to know.

Troy is a character briefly introduced in the early chapters of the book. He is an acquaintance of Ethan Rider, the protagonist. After an assault on a teleporting station which places his sister in a coma, Troy mysteriously leaves with the goal of acquiring enough funds to pay for her hospital fees. He is not seen for the rest of the story up until this point.

Iassor, is the largest kingdom/colony on the Asteroid Belt and is inhabited by Beltians. Refugees from the Belt face several hardships on Earth due to the prevalent racism. As of the latest events, Earth and The Belt are not on good terms. The present governing authority of the Belt has been overthrown by an organization called SEKT (which happens to be the main antagonist group).

Hope you enjoy!

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Hello, fellow YWS writers!

TLTSW Chapter 16: The Phantom Protocol is up!

After the base is destroyed, the team of infiltrators along with several Alliance operatives rendezvous at the remote base. Steve contemplates the best course of action for the Alliance.

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*removed jedi hood*

"Hello there!"

TLTSW Chapter 15: Resolve

In this chapter, Ethan, Amber, and Jim attempt to escape the crumbling bunker after the teleporter explosion. Enjoy!

P.S. The previous announcement on my wall was meant to be chapter 14. It's weird that I only picked it up now...

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I have FINALLY re-edited TLTSW Chapter 15

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Enjoy!

Archer's Paradox Chapter 4: Stormy Night is finally up.

In this chapter, Jay hosts Katie for the night and keeps watch over the village as Valentine's Day approaches.

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Archer's Paradox Chapter 3: Misplaced Bullseye is up!

In this chapter, Jay speaks to his father about his hallucinations and attempts to fire an arrow after ten years. Enjoy!

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The next chapter of Archer's Paradox: The Demon Wakes is up! Enjoy!

So while writing TLTSW, I got some inspiration to write a mystery/thriller (partly because I watched Batman: The Long Halloween which was one of the best noir stories I've seen thus far). So after starting and re-starting and re-writing and re-planning, I've been writing quite a bit of it while giving my first novel some much-needed time off.

Now that I have a version of it fully planned out, I decided to put it on this site. Have a look if that's your type of read. Here's a synopsis:

Jason 'Jay' Stones is a man wanting to leave a very dark past behind and focus on helping others through his passion for Archery, an art forgotten by society. That is until his best friend pays him a visit with some disturbing news.

Follow Jason Stones, a man seeking redemption for his sins, in a race to catch a mysterious killer before too much damage is caused to the people he has come to love.

Archer's Paradox Chapter 1: The Ghost

P.S. My username comes from the main character in this novel.

Hello to all my readers and reviewers!

In re-reading some chapters and doing some editing, I made one or two minuscule changes with regard to the direction I want to take Ethan in. It's a very very tiny change/retcon in the story so spoilers below if you haven't read Chapter 10: Night Off.



The above is the only change in the story thus far. Very minor but still a change.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always!

@MaybeAndrew @SalisRuinen @Liminality @IcyFlame

How to proofread your work in ChatGPT:

1. Ask it to proofread your work
2. It correct the grammar of a sentence that isn't even in your work.
3. You correct it.
4. It apologizes and proceeds to rewrite your entire chapter, completely disregarding the plot.

The audacity of this bot...

Hello everyone!

TLTSW Chapter 15: Breaking Points is out!

I had a bit of trouble writing this one and if you read it you'll probably see why xD. As it stands, this is the end of 'Part 1' of my story. At this point, I will probably polish things up based on the feedback I have gotten to make this into a novella instead of a 'part 1'.

Hope you enjoy!

@Liminality @SalisRuinen @MaybeAndrew

Thanks for all the birthday wishes

Happy birthdayyy!!

Happy birthday~! ✨🎊🎉