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Formslipper


  • winterwolf0100
    Jun 10, 2022

    Happy birthdayyy!!


  • Mageheart
    Jun 10, 2020

    Happy birthday!


  • Mageheart
    Jun 10, 2019

    Happy birthday! <3


  • Mageheart
    Jun 10, 2018

    Happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day.


  • Wordzyy
    Jun 10, 2018

    Happy b'day! Have a great day :)


  • Mageheart
    Jun 10, 2017

    Happy birthday!~ I hope you have a wonderful day that's filled with joy - you definitely deserve it! ☆


  • GDrama97
    Jun 10, 2014

    Happy Birthday hope you have a good one


  • GeeLyria
    Nov 18, 2011

    Love your avatar<3


  • EnchantedPanda
    Nov 18, 2011

    Hi Form! Thank you so much for the follow *follows back* and the review is absolutely no problem at all!


  • limegreenleopard
    Oct 26, 2011

    Thanks for the review, it was exactly what I needed to improve. :D


    Formslipper I liked your flow, word choices, and themes! As long as you accentuate those, you should be golden. ;)
    Oct 26, 2011


  • Mikko
    Oct 18, 2011

    But, by the end of the next stanza, I realized the mistake of my own inferrence...

    Hahahah, well, maybe not...

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the poem. I tend to let readers figure out things themselves because I find that that is the beauty of poetry. ;)


  • Idraax
    Oct 3, 2011

    Thanks for the review! I hope my adult life get's better soon.


  • artsy
    Sep 19, 2011

    Thanks for friending me :]


    Formslipper yup, thanks for friending back!
    Sep 20, 2011


  • carbonCore
    Sep 18, 2011

    Hiya Form! Thank you for your review!


    Formslipper Anytime, dude.
    Sep 19, 2011


  • Fortissimo
    Sep 17, 2011

    Just wanted to drop in and say hey(: P.S. Where's your avvie?


    Formslipper Hello, Fortissimo! Ugh, I don't know. I'm not sure what I'd put in there/how to get it. :(
    Sep 17, 2011


    Fortissimo You've never had an avvie?
    Sep 17, 2011

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He saw it in her eyes. The anguish, the frustration. The terrible nothing that clawed inside and sought to smother her. She knew. It was there, inside. She had been broken. Then she smiled. Oh, storms. She smiled /anyway/. It was the single most beautiful thing he'd seen in his entire life.
— Brandon Sanderson, Words of Radiance