Formslipper

I read it, and laughed on the inside all the way through, then out loud at the end. I'm not sure why I laughed, maybe because there was christmas music ...

All I want to say is that by openning my mouth I let my troubles come out In a language I don't understand Or would care to speak at all ...

All I want to say is that by openning my mouth I let my troubles come out In a language I don't understand Or would care to speak at all ...

All I want to say is that by openning my mouth I let my troubles come out In a language I don't understand Or would care to speak at all ...

I read it, only to think that the dialogue was good and it was a riveting story. However, the message you're trying to impart is ambiguous. If you're a Christian, ...

Let’s read old books, Because old books are read for absolutes, And the smell of paper, And hidden treasures Let’s set so called “art” aside, Because abstractions are silliness, Liberality ...

This is a poem about a carpenter who lived and died two thousand years ago. Christians worship this man, and I dedicate this to Him. Forty days, you’re parched No ...

I’m married to a private feeling, A hunch I get when night stops by, A thing I do to pass the time, I’m stoppered now, and now I’m not It’s ...

I read it. Thought it was a little too tellie. You give away the characters; you don't show their actions. Instead, the story's handed to me on a verbose silver ...

I read it. Here lies a spontaneous criticism of your "dramatic poem": Through my fingers, Good opener down and down. Flow contrivance- had you been in a dramatic sate, you ...

This is a spontaneous "napkin poem" that I thought up while bored in public. It's pathetic and morbid. "Flesh-cases, arms, eyes, Another stare and step, Doors and more, Fix it ...

Servile in nature Self is Sins won’t come ‘round I keep telling my life It’s fortunate that it’s all in one piece Desirable, undeniable, secret- Oh, I’m sure That life ...

I have not read it yet. Instead of simply reading it and then giving m a few thoughts, I'll just give you my spontaneous reactions after each line, in red. ...

I read it, and my first impression was shallow . And I'll tell you why- It's hard to convey emotions using only words and paper, especially when all you're doing ...

I read it. See what I did there? Anyway, I thought your use of periods was a bit of a cheap tactic. The reason? Well, as I went about the ...