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    Mar 30, 2022

    Happy Birthday!!! :D 🎂


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    Mar 30, 2022

    Happy birthday!~ 🍰


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    Mar 30, 2022

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  • Happy birthday!


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    Mar 30, 2020

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    Mar 30, 2018

    Happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day.


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    Mar 30, 2017

    Happy birthday!~ I hope you have a wonderful day that's filled with joy - you definitely deserve it! ☆

  • I imagine the "Be the first to review" and "Give a second opinion" pages being desolate in the same way as the shops in London were after being raided: trashed, empty, with the odd packet of crisps on the floor.


    Snoink Poor, poor pages. :(
    Sep 1, 2011


  • mollycarraway
    Aug 28, 2011

    Thanks so much for the review!! It was very helpful :)


    Cotton you're welcome :D your piece was truly great :)
    Aug 28, 2011


    mollycarraway Thank you so so so much :) I'm so glad you liked it!
    Aug 28, 2011


  • Narnialover4ever1
    Aug 28, 2011

    Hey :)
    Thanks for following me back :) I love YWS! It's a great site! You did a great job in the Review Day thing. Thanks again for following me :)


    Cotton cheers, right back atcha! Number 1 xD (oooh, put that as your title thing under your name, "No.1 Reviewer August 2011 :P)
    Aug 28, 2011

  • the beautiful irony of seeing a sign detailing the dangers of physical harm... from unstable gravestones....


  • laylaflame
    Aug 22, 2011

    thankyou for your review it was very helpful! and I've made some little changes becuase of it:) ..(the part were I use 'due' that confused you, was simply a substitute for 'because', hope that makes sense) :P


    Cotton that's all right :D I'm glad you managed to make sense of what I said... I'm a bit of a rambler :P
    Aug 23, 2011

  • Thanks so much! I'll do what you said with the punctuation! It is alot more powerful! Thanks!



When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides