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Cotton

  • Fantasy Novels Re: crescent Moon Chapter 4

    Hey there :) I won't pretend to know your story, but I have noticed that there are some grammatical and punctuation-related things I could help you with, so I'll probably ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: crescent Moon Chapter 4

    Hey there :) I won't pretend to know your story, but I have noticed that there are some grammatical and punctuation-related things I could help you with, so I'll probably ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Am I allowed to alter my name?

    done and dusted - thank you all for your wonderful help for this trivial yet still somehow confusing (at least to me... I have decision fatigue xD) topic. it has ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Am I allowed to alter my name?

    ... is there a YWSer with a name anything to do with frogs? because I really love them - honestly, it's insane, actually; loads come to our pond to breed ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Am I allowed to alter my name?

    aah ok, well that's decided then, definitely not xD thanks, Rosey :D

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Am I allowed to alter my name?

    OK I've just come up with these possibilities: Cotton, as jasmine so wonderfully suggested, or how about, almost the same as it is now - TheCottonRule or just CottonRule ... ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The August 28th 2011 Review Day Review

    it's so interesting that my team, Watchmen, only did 229 reviews, when the next two did considerably more... well, I know that all 17 of mine were max point reviews, ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Am I allowed to alter my name?

    hmmm interesting... I was also thinking LilliePad, because Lillie's my name xD although seeing it, it's maybe not so great... jasmine, I think you're onto something :D

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Am I allowed to alter my name?

    aah great thanks :D just need to come up with a witty alternative, that is simultaneously awesome and intelligent... hmmmmmmmmm

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Am I allowed to alter my name?

    I've been on here a while, and well - let's just say I think I've grown out of the version of my YWS alias a little... I'm seventeen, so the ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Chapter One - When We Grow Up

    Is it just me who can't see it? Sorry, posted this in the wrong section. Transferring it over to the correct one! Does this mean the story exists elsewhere? If ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Hidden Flame: A dragon's secret Chapter 2

    hello :D I've become honed and streamlined in my method of reading pieces and picking out the small errors in grammar or punctuation or whatever that mere mortals miss (mwahahaha... ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Lgeacy Chapter five part one

    me again... I just realised I forgot to mention something I noticed, so I've being going back through my past reviews to find the story that had it in... convoluted, ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Art Murderers Ch 6 (Edit 4)

    hey :D I'm new (sorry) so I thought, for such a clearly defined, well-written, interesting story, I'd take on the role of simply being your error-checker - there were so ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Touch Of Stone: Chapter Four

    hello :D I've not read any of this before, but you managed to write this in such a way that I didn't feel lost, and doing that without foresight is ...

    Aug 28, 2011


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