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  • winterwolf0100
    Jan 30, 2022

    Happy birthdayyy!!!


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    Jan 30, 2022

    Happy birthday! 🎂


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    Jan 30, 2021

    Happy birthday! 🎉


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    Jan 30, 2021

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    Jan 30, 2020

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    Jan 30, 2019

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    Jan 30, 2019

    Happy birthday! <3


  • RadhikaD
    Jan 30, 2018

    Happy bday !! @mikepyo


  • Mageheart
    Jan 30, 2018

    Happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day.


  • Mageheart
    Jan 30, 2017

    Happy birthday, @mikepyro! I hope you have a wonderful day! ☆


  • xXTheBlackSheepXx
    Aug 8, 2012

    Hey thanks for the reviews! They were very helpful ^_^

    email- hannahgonebananas29@yahoo.com

    Congrats on finishing Animal! And being halfway done with the movie :) Hope your summer has been fun!


    mikepyro Been pretty good. We're shooting all the convenience store scenes and the zombie attack tmrw.

    Sent it! :D

    Aug 8, 2012


    xXTheBlackSheepXx Cool. I don't remember a zombie attack though... maybe it's part of the revised version, lol.
    Aug 10, 2012


  • xXTheBlackSheepXx
    Jul 6, 2012

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    here's two of the newest drawings I've done. If you could give some tips or just comment, it would help a lot!


    mikepyro Yeah sure!
    Sorry, been off a bit. Finished the new vers of Animal. 83 new pages. 285 Pages long now.

    And about 55% of Bob the Tumor shot now.

    Aug 7, 2012


  • xXTheBlackSheepXx
    Jun 25, 2012

    Well, I'll be posting some new art of mine a little later, so if you wanted to check that out it would be much appreciated. I might post some links for it, but if you just go to the art forums you can find my new stuff pretty easily.


    mikepyro Just tell me when you post em and I'll check em out.
    Jun 28, 2012


  • xXTheBlackSheepXx
    Jun 25, 2012

    I'll take it all in just one mammoth word document, that way I can copy it and just write in my comments with red font or something. It sounds like you've got a lot of interesting new characters, so I'll probably end up rambling about them at some point ^_^ You threw in everything but the kitchen sink, I'm sure :)

    I'll love to see your movie on youtube when it comes out! It'll be interesting to see how you adapted it on camera and I'm sure it'll be fun seeing you act x)


    mikepyro There is a 45 sec long scene where Bob the Tumor becomes a musical. (and around 10 new scenes) 45 scenes in total. 15 shot.
    Jun 25, 2012


    mikepyro The Carnival section really delves into John, his family, and the new characters but it is a much slower chapter. And The Man in the Suit, even though he only has like five scenes, is one of my favs. Honestly I loved all seven carnival characters, including Alexander, the coffin maker who's kind of an asshole about having to save John's life.
    Jun 25, 2012

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  • xXTheBlackSheepXx
    Jun 15, 2012

    Hahaha, I love how you say "Just 2 volunteer jobs and I'm working in medical records..." like it's nothing! lol. :D

    Wow, that's so cool your friends are working on a film adaption! I still think the story is really sweet, so I'm sure you guys will do a great job on it! Will you be uploading it to youtube or something so I can see it?

    And the revisions sound really interesting! I did get just a bit lost towards the middle-end. I think organizing it into a more solid, 5-part story, will help with that! And more stuff with Rose and Samuel will help tie the beginning to the mid and end, too.

    And the new characters sound exciting. Will you be keeping that one chick... Jane? I think x) The one the main character met after Rose died, and then she died too. If I'm remembering correctly!


    xXTheBlackSheepXx Yeah, it feels awesome being a successful graduate :) We'll see if I can handle college... it seems a lot of people want me to go, haha x)
    Jun 15, 2012


    mikepyro Yes Jane is still there. Not sure how much of her story will change. Prob not much, just expansion. I feel it's better if she dies. John and the tall man's confrontation in the end is the same, it's pretty much how I always imagined the story. There's also The Man in the Suit, the man who pays Varlyn (changed tall man's name since it's already the name of a killer in No Country for Old Man) and appears in five scenes as well as meets John. Don't know if any of the 7 carnival characters will die. Probably not though, suprisingly. And I have one moment of vengeance from John in the carnival that shows how lost he is, loved it. Loved all the new characters anmd the best thing is there's humor in the carnival story, not alot, but like the runaway family and prince's jokes but throughout the section.
    Almost finished with it. Prince and John's first confrontation is new. And there's a hatchet at one point, gotta love the hatchet!

    John's arc to lost faith and reacceptance to resigning himself to death will be much clearer too. Plus more Prince, can never have too much Prince. And Tall Man (who we lost track of in the middle) and his old master. Fuck I threw in everything I could! :D

    Jun 16, 2012

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