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Prologue
How sweet death seems after years and years of waiting. The silent kiss of numbness, the same you get when you go to sleep, the trembling whisper of the fading heart beats, that breath which whistles under the terror of unknown... ah yes! Death.
What best suits Death? A dark hood, a scythe, a shadowy face? Give me a break! When saw my death she was wearing a red night dress and a knife... a kitchen knife to be more exact. Fun to watch her leaping over the dinner table and stabbing the life out of me, literally.
Hmp... Cute life, simple life, sweet life. Fragile and cruel in the same time. Screw that! Get a dark hood, a scythe and become antisocial and you`re set for eternity.
Chapter 1 – A remnant of past
Rake left his head backwards leaving the cold and hard raindrops to hit his pale face. It was proof for him that he was alive and for him it was enough. The promise he made: Die when feelings are gone, was still there in his head, pounding with the same rhythm as his heart, with the same power of his body, annoying as the nightmares he got.
Actually that was the reason for why he was naked on the roof of the apartment house – a bloody nightmare. He was afraid that he will become a senseless body, with no soul, controlled by his inner demons, a puppet waiting for its puppeteer.
Rake? Get inside... You`ll catch a cold.
"I`d like that..." he responded to the voice that hunted him for years. A soft voice, a soothing voice, a beautiful yet terrifying voice.
Don’t be foolish! It`s time...
"The time... What is the time?"
2:43 a.m.
"Thanks, voice..."
A smile spread on his face which seemed to be covered with a white and thin layer of chalk. His blue eyes gazed upon the city covered in the darkness of the night and once again he realized the love of his state. Rake always considered himself more than a mad man, more than a simple lunatic that would trade his clothes for a violent cold.
"It`s time... "
A deep breath of moist air gave him the courage to turn and get dressed. The stair case was empty and smelling like cat piss... He killed his cat for that matter, but the smell didn’t stop. No one else seemed to notice it so he quickly learned to live with it. He had a small apartment there... not much in it. A couch, a TV, a phone and a gun. Those were the only things he owned beside the clothes which were neatly folded in a corner of the room.
Near the couch empty beer bottles and cigarette ends were laying forgotten there, never to be thrown away or even moved, maybe just accidently. The small TV was also on the floor positioned in front of the black leather couch which looked a little worn out with scratches at the edges, proof that he once owned a cat.
The cold floor was filled with paper and photos. He loved his past... It defined him as human, as a living person, a creature capable to feel and think rational. She defined him...
That voice was her voice, that face that hunted his dream was her face, those feelings he searched were also hers. He lived through her death.
"It`s time..."
Rake dragged himself into the bathroom where a filthy mirror stood hanged on the wall painted with writings – names, numbers, addresses, signs. He wrote them and he was proud. He knew their meaning, he knew how to read them and write them and understand them and use them.
His eyes were red and burning and he turned to see his reflection in the mirror. A memory of what he was once stood there watching him back. A pale face, bony, blue eyes, deep eyes, tired eyes, dark hair, untidy hair, wet hair, scruffy beard, harsh beard, skinny body, fragile body... memory.
RainColdFeetShiverKnockDoorVoiceFearMirrorFistFaceFloorCouchKnockHandBottleTirednessGun BathroomNumberNamesTimeTimeTimeGunShotPainScreamFloorPainNumb. Pain,Pain...PAIN!
Sweet pain, loving pain, his pain. He left himself laying on the hard and cold floor in violent spasms as the bullet he put in his head made his way into his brain and nerves. Red blood, thick blood, coursing blood.
And the sweet numbness of death shattered in the touch of the raindrops.
Sweet pain, loving pain, my pain.
He opened his eyes only to see the town again illuminated by the stretching lightning that gave the sky a nightmarish look.
It`s time, it`s time, it`s time.
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