Wicki's Editing/Reviewing Thing

Hi, I love editing and reviewing work, and I have too much time on my hands, as it's spring break--so bombard me with requests!
I will review:
-Chapters of novels
-Short stories
I will not review:
-Poetry
-Play scripts
(It would be hypocritical of me to do so, since I'm terrible at both.)
I'm prone to science fiction, but I love any genre really.
Just link me to your piece and I'll review as soon as possible. Depending on how many requests I get, it could take a while or so fast you'll think I'm a stalker

Hi, I have this short story, and it's kind of incomplete right now, and I was wondering if you would check it out and tell me if it's any good and review it. If it is good, do you think I should continue it? work.php?id=94369

Finished review

Hey there Wicki. I have this super short story that I just wrote for my Writing class and wanted some feedback. Keep in mind that I was limited on page numbers as well as the character I created. It was a "character sketch"

Anyways. Here is the linky http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94408 I really hope that works. :/

Thank you in advance

Hey Wicki. I'm working on a novel, and I need some devoted reviewers to help me through the entire process. Thanks in advance. :]

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