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So I don't have to dig up my old one which failed spectacularly. This one won't. I promise.

I'll review any fiction. I'm terrible at poetry so don't even think about requesting that. And if it's part of a novel, start with the first chapter on or else I won't understand what's going on.

So. Without further ado: link, please!

PS. I reserve the right to decline any reviews as I like if you already have too many good reviews or for rating issues.
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Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two?
Prolouge:
viewtopic.php?t=90746
Chapter one:
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If you wish I'd love a review on my novel Animal, the greatest novel on YWS (I base this on the fact that I am the world's greatest author, of course) :D

Here's Ch1. Be warned it is an 18+ piece, just for violence (no sex, drugs, cursing, etc)
viewtopic.php?t=83054

If you prefer a shorter piece, stand alone, I'd love a review on Bob the Tumor, a Cancerous Romantic Dramedy!
viewtopic.php?t=89285




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BerlynnRae - I've already reviewed that Prologue before! But I did review your first chapter now :D

Mykepyro - I'm sorry, but I must decline. You already have so many amazing reviews for each piece, I have nothing much to write in a review since it's already been stated.
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Then perhaps this piece. It's one of my older works, 2 reviews only.
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This should totes be bumped. Reviews, anyone?
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I will love you forever if you review this!

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Done! :D
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Please could you review the second half of the first chapter of Spark? viewtopic.php?f=361&t=91618&p=944493#p944493. I think you reviewed the first part, so it shouldn't be confusing :).
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Done, tink!
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Reviews anyone? With the challenge coming up, I'll be getting to the requested reviews first above anything else.
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Hello! I've read some of your reviews and I admire them greatly. Would you mind reviewing my short story Organ Donor?

Thanks!
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Thanks, Sputnik! I appreciate the comment. I'll review that first tomorrow :D
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Bump! Reviews?
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Can you review my short story please?
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92681
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