Firstly, I am extremely impressed with your writing style, if not just for the fact that you are thirteen years old. Clever title, it was the very first place my eyes looked and my click followed suit. I was pleasently surprised that what I read was actually quite great! Your brief poem made me think about human nature and how funny it actually is! Well done.
That's so PERFECT!! It's short, funny, simple and absolutely true! And the tittle...Oh, the tittle...It's so good. I mean, if you want someone to do something, tell him/her not to do it. And the poem just reassures it. Congratulations! Keep writing.
It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. "This is calm, and it's doctor!" (My DR. Reid -- Best line ever)
Lol I love this poem, it's so clever. Human nature strikes again. If we see something that is meant to stay off limits or forbidden of course we're gonna check it out!! Love it! XD
