I want to get more from this, all I get is some haunting skeleton lady is coming to get me.*scared face*
If I read this as part of a complete story or novel even, it would fit in perfectly, add more, I want more.
Your writing is refreshing, easily flows, and leaves an eery feeling which is amazing, but, it needs more.
This is like an incomplete thought, a beautiful, eery, and well written thought, but to me it's not finished.
I realize I'm rambling, and this is only my opinion, so many apologies.
But all in all, perfection...I just desire there to be more. Even left as it is, it's a very good poem, and intrigues me to read more of your works. *like*
