Math...mwahahahah

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i liked it but i stink at math
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I really thought that this was great. I know someone said before that you can say things like this without being cliche, which points out your talent. There were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes, the one that jumped out at me the most being your spelling of 'loathe'. But I really liked this poem, and I'm really sorry that there isn't anything else that I can say about it.
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It blows my mind how many people LOVE math but still feel they can relate :) I HATE MATH with a passion that would make that movie Braveheart look like a Disney production. I honestly don't believe there is a hate anything near the hate for math. I can appreciate it, its the creation and discovering of worlds, just like writing, but its a cruel, strict, definitive world that leaves no room for imagination :)
You have a good poem, but as before mentioned, put some narrative details/jargon into it that link it to its name - math.
Also, "I burst into butterfly jitters" isn't really a line I would use in a poem displaying so much disgust :) just a quick nit pick.
Otherwise, very good. Keep it up. :)
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Math is so dumb.

Anyway, of course, I dig the poem. It expressed my hate-filled thoughts perfectly, which is of course, the ultimate proof that math is, in fact, evil. The only thing I could say I disliked was, as mentioned before, the rhyming scheme because I really couldn't find one. The flow wasn't as... flowly as I would like, but hey. Math makes people do crazy things.




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This poem speaks the truth!!! :D Even though I'm reasonable at math I absoloutely HATE it! I love how you put "mwahahahah" in the title, it got my attention. There isn't really anything else to say. Keep up the fantastic writing! :D
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"A million different ways to say the same thing!"--this characteristic of Math has always bothered me; I don't know what's the point of doing that...
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Great poem! I myself despise math. I completely hate it with a passion and would rather have it removed from the word completely... But that would end in a terrible disaster... Math just isn't for me.

Anyways! Aside from the small comma problem that someone posted above me with, it was a great work. Keep on writing. :)
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