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Hey, would you please review my poem?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post865211.html#p865211

Thank you dear :)
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades






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Folks! I'm looking to stockpile points! I probably won't use them, but it feels good to have them!

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