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tinkembell · 2011-02-26T23:26:21Z

I can't see it. Can't feel it either. My soul is lost, in a torrent of pain. It's breaking up, bit by bit. It's slowly dying, from a deadly fever. My heart is torn, sliced by the falling rain. I don't know where I'm going. I hate myself for not knowing. My mind is broken, wires frayed with time. They're a mess, a jumble of feelings. A cryptic maze with too low ceilings. My emotions are dead, an unspoken rhyme. I can't.

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Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:54 pm

lele253isme says... · Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:54 pm

so much emotion put into those rhyming words you should publish it I like it so much. I think that i would buy your book of poems.

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I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

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