Cal's Fanmix & Proper Critique Central [Edited 10/23/10]

Caligula's Launderette · 2008-03-03T09:09:26Z

This is not really strictly about writing, but what Sam calls novel-love . I will be posting here updates on proper critiques I am working on, as well as the fanmixes. Also, if you have PC tokens (Proper Critiques) or FM tokens (Fanmix), you can cash them in here. If I have totally put this is the wrong forum, please feel free to move it. By the way, a proper critique is a review/critique of someone's work where I properly apply myself to it, thus I print it out and scribble all over it. ;) Ta, Cal. Fanmix & Proper Critique Central Edited 11/15/08 Fanmixes List Angel of Death: Mixes for Angel of Death AWritersFantasy: Paint the Stars & Fletchings Conrad Rice: NaNo Playlists & Nano Mix Dream Deep: Mein Herz Brennt & Das Marchen & In Both Dreams and Darkness Fand: Fate Works, Unknown Kylan: Short Wave Radio mizz-iceberg: We Are The Village Green Sam: Retrospect [ I , II , III , IV ] & Mouth of the Microcosm & Inverted Compass & Albatross & Macabre Ticks & (Sam part ii.) > Among the Infidels & The Poison in My Blood Snoink: Hope is a thing with feathers & Our Endless, Numbered Days Suzanne: The Trouble We've Come to Know & At Sixes and Sevens [With You] Teague: Fragile Little Things EP Emporium Trident: Flip The Switch Writersdomain: Here Be Dragons & Fólkvangr YWS: Certain Twilights Fanmixes In-Progress Azila: Mix for Snow Evi: Mix for [Undetermined Work] Poor Imp: The Planet Was Here ( Vetrin'iy ) & the secret in the back of my skull ( Stage-Boy ) Sam: Et nox facta est! ( Lazy Bones ) Proper Critiques In-Progress FRAYEDjade: An Artificial Matrimony. Hannah: Rubber Immortal [Contest Prizes (4)] Kylan: We All Fall Down 2 [Contest Prize] // undertows mizz-iceberg: Sentient II [Contest Prize] Ohio Impromptu: Stanislavsky's Chainsaw Sam: evangelical evangelists have eaten all our food again. smorgishborg: Invasion of the Penis Snatchers [Contest Prize] PC Tokens Adnamarine: 1 [Contest Prize] Angel of Death: 1 [Contest Prize] Azila: 1 [Contest Prize] BigBadBear: 3 [Contest Prizes] Conrad Rice: 4 [Contest Prizes] Evi: 1 [Contest Prizes] Gadi: 3 [Contest Prize] Hannah: 3 [Contest Prizes] HC: 1 [Contest Prizes] Jellybean: 1 [Contest Prize] Jiggity: 3 [Contest Prize] KailaMarie: 2 [Contest Prizes] Kylan: 5 [Contest Prize] Little Tin Fish: 1 [Contest Prize] Medusa: 7 [Contest Prizes] Sam: 8 [Contest Prizes] Snoink: 3 [Contest Prizes] Suzanne: 4 [Contest Prizes] TL G-Wooster: 3 [Contest Prize] FM Tokens BigBadBear: 1 [Contest Prize] Evi: 1 [Contest Prize] Gadi: 2 [Contest Prize] Hannah: 1 [Contest Prize] HC: 1 [Contest Prize] Jellybean: 1 [Contest Prize] Jiggity: 2 [Contest Prize] KailaMarie: 1 [Contest Prize] Kylan: 3 [Contest Prize] Little Tin Fish: 1 [Contest Prize] Medusa: 3 [Contest Prizes] Sam: 2 [Contest Prize] smorgishborg: 1 [Contest Prize] Suzanne: 1 [Contest Prizes] TL G-Wooster: 1 [Contest Prize]

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Sun Jan 24, 2010 7:42 pm

Caligula's Launderette says... · Sun Jan 24, 2010 7:42 pm

I think I have some of it critiqued, I just never posted it.

I have also updated my Critiques List [1/24/10].

- Cal.

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
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Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:53 am

Caligula's Launderette says... · Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:53 am

Updated PC list. 1/26/10

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:43 pm

Caligula's Launderette says... · Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:43 pm

Proper Critiques Posted 02/02/10

heart dissection

impression #2: les pêches (peaches)

impression #1: les gens de la ville (cityfolk)

Incisive Coalition

Robins

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:31 pm

Caligula's Launderette says... · Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:31 pm

Proper Critiques In-Progress Added 02/04/10

Romanov

picture of an old cowboy dying in the city

Alice: Chapter One

Delm(searching for a better title) chapter "Generosity"

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:53 pm

Caligula's Launderette says... · Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:53 pm

Proper Critiques Posted 02/04/10

An Excerpt from Shrive

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:19 pm

Caligula's Launderette says... · Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:19 pm

Proper Critiques In-Progress Added 02/07/10

Under a Bright Blue Sky

Papillion (1)

Rentre á la Maison

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Tue Feb 09, 2010 11:38 pm

Caligula's Launderette says... · Tue Feb 09, 2010 11:38 pm

Proper Critiques In-Progress Added 02/09/10

"Insomnia", a small character analysis

Prologue and Ch. 1 (part 1) - The Spirits

Cursed

"Sepia" Rewrite

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:30 am

Caligula's Launderette says... · Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:30 am

Proper Critiques Posted 03/06/10

Shrive: Prologue

Shrive: Chapter 1

Delm(searching for a better title) chapter "Generosity"

Of Jinn and Devil

Alice: Chapter One

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Mon May 24, 2010 11:41 pm

Caligula's Launderette says... · Mon May 24, 2010 11:41 pm

Proper Critiques Posted 05/24/10

Under a Bright Blue Sky

Papillion (1)

Rentre á la Maison

"Insomnia", a small character analysis

Romanov

picture of an old cowboy dying in the city

Prologue and Ch. 1 (part 1) - The Spirits

Cursed

"Sepia" Rewrite

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:58 am

Caligula's Launderette says... · Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:58 am

Proper Critique Posteds 10/30/01

Marie Antoinette

Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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