Before I Died

I am buried as you cry
You think I hated you, but it was a lie
I always loved you and you never knew

Before I died I wanted to tell you
But this is what came to my mind
You never loved me, Just desperate
And lonely but now I see the truth
and wish i could have seen it sooner

But now as I look down on you
I wish I could have told you but
it's too late
I tore your heart out and threw it away

It's interesting- YOu had a lot of simple spelling and grammar mistakes though-you might want to reread it and fix those.

soulidium wrote:I am buried as you cry
#FF0000 ">You think I hated you#FF0000 ">, but it was a lie
I always loved you and you never knew

Before I #FF0000 ">died I wanted to tell you
#FF0000 ">But this is what came to my mind
#FF0000 ">You never loved me, Just desperate
#FF0000 ">And lonely but now I see the truth
and wish i could #FF0000 ">have seen it soon#FF0000 ">er

But now as I look down on you
I wish I could #FF0000 ">have told you but
it's to#FF0000 ">o late
I tore your heart out and #FF0000 ">threw it away

I have tried to fix your spelling mistakes etc in red
I'm a bit confused by this poem and I'm not really sure what it's about so I can't really make any comments about how you could improve it because I'm sure you know what you are trying to communicate.

Good luck,
Emalily