My uniform was stuck to my back with sweat,(maybe you could try "from")
Another thing I should think was a problem is the fact that your work is too crowded, try and separate it a bit.
I like the way you write. It's very clear, and to the point. I also spotted no spelling errors as I read through. Your story is also interesting. Good luck with it
Uh, Lisa, the whole reason we have elected officials is so we don't have to think all the time. Just like that rainforest scare a few years back: our officials saw there was a problem and they fixed it, didn't they? — Homer Simpson
