My Guardian Angel

My angel above my shoulder,
My angel above my head.
My angel by my window,
My angel above my bed.

My angel never leaves me,
Guarding me as she clings.
She's watching over my life,
Holding me under her wing.

My angel is my protector
That God's sent from above.
She brings my life much kindness,
Never shows a lack thereof.

Eep, okay I'm a little reluctant to review this but I will anyway. I'm gonna be a little techincal so brace yourself.

An angel above my shoulder,
An angel above my head.
An angel by my window,
An angel above my bed.

I'm just reading this but I am getting a picture of 4 angels all around this person. I'm just saying, it seems like, the way you describe it, there is more than on of these angels.

My angel never leaves me,
Guarding me as she clings.
She's watching over my life,
Holding me under her wind.

Clings? Not the best word here, unless her wings are broken and she's fluttering helplessly. And also you don't specify what she is clinging to, therefore, I think it sounds odd and out of place. In the last line I think you mean wing
Other than the clingyness I really like this stanza.

My angel is my guardian
That God's sent from above.
She brings my life much kindness,
Never shows a lack thereof.

Okay we know your angel is guarding you. You said that in the previous stanza so you son't have to say guardian, maybe say protector?

Hope I helped.

~peanut~

Bailey Holcomb wrote:My angel above my shoulder,
My angel above my head.
My angel by my window,#FF0000 "> I'd like it more if you put above instead of by. the by interupts the flow.
My angel above my bed. #BF0000 ">nice rhymes.

My angel never leaves me,
Guarding me as she clings. #BF0000 ">I'm confused. clings to what? you?
She's watching over my life,
Holding me under her wing.

My angel is my protector #BF0000 ">I LOVE this paragraph!!
That God's sent from above.
She brings my life much kindness,
Never shows a lack thereof.

you did a great job throughout the poem and I'm glad I could review it.
p.s.
Please dont take this personally!! I loved your poem!! You can keep it the same and I would be happy.