Now this isn't a science fiction thing and it ain't magical either. It involves the government (I'm thinking like a dark, militaristic agency of America who may try to be making some new weapon [a person] and it ain't Captain America!)
My queries:
What superpowers should I choose that are not overpowered (I can always put limits). My current team of five are:
Super Strength (Max lift is Black Panther = Spiderman. Maybe somewhere around 800 lbs)
Enhanced Physical Attributes (Stamina, Speed, Invulnerability, Durability, Immunity to disease, sight and hearing. None of these ridiculously overpowered. You can hear him breathing hard after running 1500m in a minute sprinting.)
(Broadcasting Thoughts, Empathy, Mild Offensive Capabilities and very, minor mind reading capabilities. Basically she'll know something reall bad is about to happen, just not what. She can't flipping retrieve your memories)
Teleportation, Heightened Reflexes but not super-senses. He's not the fighter and he wouldn't teleport anywhere he can't see. He can only teleport within five kilometers. Also, how would I write the effects for his powers?
He's not Storm. The winds bend to his will yes but he's only a child. He can muster up something nearing tornado but just not quite. If he wants to freeze you he should be in close contact with you and somehow, if the whole electricity thing works (Should it?), he has to punch you for the shock.
My ranged juggernaut. Think Starkiller from Star Wars: Force Unleashed and [i/] not [i/] Jean Grey or any marvel telekinetics. maybe Hellion. How much can she lift? Definitely no more than a truck and she's not charging with stamina.
I love Conner the most. All of the characters are 14 and they'd get the trash beaten out of them if any one of them went up against Conner (whose studies fighting styles and has those cool batarang things which he doesn't use much).
So anyways, that's the characters. And the Antagonists who think they're manipulating Conner are a kind of agency. Maybe even one dedicated to the downfall of America but who are working for the country.
A final point, this story will be really realistic. The only robot I may have will be at the very end, the scariest thing ever. If Jack is hit, he bleeds. All of their powers fluctuate. Jason won't explode when he teleports but wouldn't teleport into water. He can't teleport anyone but himself without great strain. Andrea hates her powers. If any of you have every been to superhero nation and read the articles, that's what I'm aiming for.
Well, if you could see what you could do that would be great. PM if you have anything for me, my reviewing gland is itchy but I'm a terrible searcher. Thanks in hopeful advance. TheHero... TheNewHero.
