Oh Ruben of Wonky Eyes

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EmmaJane
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:52 pm
EmmaJane says... · Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:52 pm
Hey! So, this is Ruben, of wonky eyes, as you can probably see. He's a character of mine...
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Flower~Child
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:50 pm
Flower~Child says... · Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:50 pm
Ok, review time.

One thing I noticed is that his neck doesn't go in it shoots out. If you pulled it in a little it would look better.

The next thing I noticed is that his shirt is a little stiff. It need wrinkles or something.

Also one eye is much higher than the other one.

Well that's all I have.

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mandapanda
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Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:47 pm
mandapanda says... · Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:47 pm
One thing I noticed is that he is too broad shouldered.
That makes his head looks smaller than his body.

The next thing, his right eye is higher than his left.

Also, his nostrils don't look right.

As Flower~Child said, he needs some wrinkles or something in his shirt.
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