review needed- the last goodbye

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Please review my work, need it desperately!
Wrote a short story after so long, and work really hard too.
Just want to know if it's good or not.

Mod Edit: Sorry, spike. The WRFF forum is for advertising your own reviewing services, not for advertising your work.

Pick a reviewer's thread, and request a review in there instead.

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Human minds are more full of mysteries than any written book and more changeable than the cloud shapes in the air.
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