Fanfiction - why is so much of it bad?

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During my months on YWS, I've been complimented several times on my fanfics. I do admit I write quite a lot of it. However, the fact still remains - a lot of fanfiction is, to be completely blunt, very bad writing; brimming with bad grammar, sloppy writing, Mary-Sues, you name it.

The question is, why?

I'm not going to diss fanfiction at all. I think it's a lovely thing. I write fanfics and I read fanfics (barring porn/erotica), and thoroughly enjoy doing both. (Yes, I even read all the cheesy WAFF and Hurt-Comfort fics. Eat me now).

I think there are three main reasons for all the bad fanfiction out there, and they are as follows:

1. Lack of basic writing skills. I think that many people who write fanfiction are just starting out on their writing journeys, or else consider writing a mildly entertaining pastime, and so lack a lot of the foundation skills for storybuilding. Good grammar, plotting, character development, spelling, and a reasonable vocabulary are all needed to construct a truly good story. Fanfiction is not a good way to develop these skills; while it's entertaining and a good way to exercise your muscles, I don't think any beginning writers should make their first story a fanfic. There's just too much of an urge to not put any thought into it; to just take the canon characters, add a healthy measure of angst and WAFF, maybe throw in a Mary Sue or five, and then be done with it. The temptation isn't so great with original fiction.

2. Writing solely for others. People thrive on attention; writers thrive on reviews (at least, most writers do. I do). Even something as simple as "wow kewl story" can lift hearts. It's simply a good feeling to know that your work has been read and, hopefully, appreciated.

This can get out of hand, however. People can start writing only for the sake of getting comments, comments, and more comments. They write for attention, and writing a fanfic for a popular fandom will probably get you some of that. And, of course, the comments had better be positive, or else the poor little snubbed fanfic author will get discouraged and stop posting chapters. :( Sad? Well, yes, sad because a potentially very good writer has given up, and that's always a sad thing. But it's also pathetic. Don't write for attention. Write to write.

3. Writing just to gratify yourself. I know this goes against the above point a bit, but it's also a problem. This, I believe, is the reason for so many Mary Sue's, perfect characters, endless flowery descriptions, pointless sex scenes, and everything else that can really ruin a fanfic. People write just to please themselves and make themselves feel good. They use self-insertions and Mary Sue's to put themselves right in the middle of the action, to surround themselves with beautiful, perfect people, to self-indulge whenever possible, and generally to satisfy ever little fantasy and dream born while while the author was wallowing in self-pity in her room, or dreaming about that one boy she's had her eye on. Writing is a discipline, an art. Although writing is certainly enjoyable, you shouldn't create plots and characters just to serve you. Let them serve the story itself. Again: write to write, and for nothing else.

If people would make an effort to avoid these things, I think the world of fandom would be a much, much more agreeable place. My advice for everyone is to handle fanfiction in the exact way you'd handle original fiction: with dedication and care. Fanfiction isn't a cheap substitute for real writing, nor is it any sort of easy shortcut. It's writing, and writing is art.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go and write the next chapter of my Wind Waker fanfic! Thanks for the time. ^^
Last edited by Hawkie on Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:57 am, edited 1 time in total.




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Exactly. I agree with everything you've said. I've also noticed that most fan fiction is just bad writing, period. I think that it's because a lot of people are lazy and think that, instead of making up their own characters and world, it would be easier to just steal someone else's work. Fan fiction can be great when writers take the time to be creative and put some effort into it, but most of them don't, and that gives the whole genre a bad name.
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I agree with what you say. I just thought I'd add another point: Most people who write fan-fiction utilize a world and characters that have already been created. This means that certain vital components of the writing process are neglected, resulting in mediocre to bad stories.

When an author develops his own environment, he becomes attached to the characters and learns to know them for who he wants them to be. When working with a world that is not your own, you cannot truly become a part of it.

Most people who write fan-fiction are too lazy or too unskillful to create their own world. This is not true with all writers, but the good ones are few and far between. A good fan-fiction writer will take the created world and make it into his own and produce a great story out of it.
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Point two is exactly on target. When I was an active member of fanfiction.net and had this massive Twilight fanfic going, I would check it like three times a day after I posted a new chapter to see if anyone had posted a new review and if I didn't get that many I would be upset. :) (Ah, middle school days....)
Geez, and looking back on that story hurts my soul a little. It's so poorly written and it just plain sucks. I was so busy just getting this 'awesome' plot idea out that I didn't even bother with making it look or sound that great.
I do really love fanfiction though. I'm sort of (really slowly) working on one right now for Maximum Ride which I'm a little more proud of. It's just really fun putting these characters that you adore in to your own situations and make them do things you wish they'd do in the actual books. :)

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The majority of fanfics are just wish fulfillment. When you're a writer with your own characters, you tend to have a little more dignity :P




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I think that the majority of fanfics are terrible because they try to copy right off the direct idea of the fanfic. There are barely any new ideas envolved in most, and you get the feeling of repeating characters from the original. Often the protagonist will be nearly identical.
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Everytime I read something like "wow kewl story" a little piece of me dies.
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Explosive_Pen wrote:Everytime I read something like "wow kewl story" a little piece of me dies.


I know, right? I'll read a fanfiction where the characters act completely out of character and the grammar is absent, and all I see on the reviews is, "LOL dats so awsome what will hapen next?!?!???" it's heartbreaking. I mean, how hard is it for someone to realize that something is crud? XD
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