Mosquito Bites

Okay, so this isn't really Something Completely Different, or even slightly original but what the hey.





I critique (awesomely, btw)

Any fiction, except Romance. Mainly because it makes me squirm.


I do not critique (with awesome refusal)

Poetry. Full stop, end of story, exploding grenade. No poetry. The Vogon has spoken.

Romantic Fiction, as already stated.

R-rated stuff. R-ratings make me pale and faint.


Things I kind of, sort of, might do well

Dialogue.
Word order.
Description.


Examples

Gyr's Gypsie Eyes.
Rudelyn's Memoir
Gyr's In Thrall (there's several of my crits on that page)
OnCeUpOnAtIm3Xo's Eyes of the Empire



What I want in return

Ninja training.
An interview with Lex Luthor
Crits on Scavenger




It may hurt, but it helps.

Hey TL G-Wooster!

If you could crit Eyes of the Empire I'd be so extremely greatful! You don't have to read the prologue, but if you want to you can

As for the ninja training, try this and for the interview with lex luthor try this.

Again, thank you so much!

Done it!

Night Terrors

I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

Done, BBB!

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^_^ Review please! This is actually due today. >_> I will take a look at Scavenger as soon as I finish all my homework. o.O

Will you please review this for me? It's my entry for 'Which Path to take' and I need more reviews so I can make it better.

Dragon Tamer
Fantasy Fiction
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Thanks!



~Tayla

Luna 1

Luna 2

I would appreciate it greatly if you would review these two

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This is for Rosey's contest. The deadline is on the 20th and... *cringes*... it, well, sucks. I'd really appreciate any advice.

Hey, Jocelyn here.
If you have time, I'd love a review on both chapters I have posted of my NaNo, Darkness.
Chapter 1:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37645.html

And Chapter 2:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50503.html

Thanks!

Guys, um, this is kind of closed. This is the equivalent of a zombie; a walkind-dead thread, resurrected. Out of date.

I'll complete the crits already requested, but the thread's closed. Let it die once more and sink slowly to the bottom of the forum.

TL G-Wooster wrote:Guys, um, this is kind of closed. This is the equivalent of a zombie; a walkind-dead thread, resurrected. Out of date.

I'll complete the crits already requested, but the thread's closed. Let it die once more and sink slowly to the bottom of the forum.

Then you should also indicate that in the initial post.

In any case, locking this.