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The book I'm writing now involves cloning, and my main charters come into contact with their clones a lot. So they are in many scenes together. My problem is how I should tell the difference between the two. Should I give the clones different names or should I replace their names with numbers.
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Whatever you think best.

Personally, I think the different name route might work better, but then, I don't know what sort of things you intend to be doing.

*shrugs*

Try experimenting - give both way a go, and see for yourself which works best.
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I agree that it's up to you. I've done a cloning story before, and I use a nickname that the reader is already familiar with for the real one, while using the full name for the clone. (Real= Al. Clone= Alexa). But whatever works with you. Numbers tend to be quite popular nowadays.
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It might be cool to use the same names, and the reader will be trying to work out who's who. Of course, the simpler method would be to simply change the name.
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You could have one of the origional characters make nicknames for the clones.
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What would be really cool is if the real character's name can be written in numbers/letters and numbers. o___o

Like... I dunno. Dorris and DOR-15. (Yay, Meet the Robinsons! xD)

Otherwise, maybe there's a glitch in your story's cloning machine and a certain aspect of the character was not cloned. Or possibly... something else. xD

Good luck! Sounds like a fascinating story you've got going. ^_^
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Or something could have gone horribly wrong and all the clones are of the opposite gender O.O
That would make telling them apart from the original easier XD
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LydiaB wrote:Or something could have gone horribly wrong and all the clones are of the opposite gender O.O
That would make telling them apart from the original easier XD


Ahahaha! That would be pretty funny actually.
Maybe give the clones some strange marking or something? Not something very noticeable, but still different.




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In the James Patterson Novels "Maximum Ride" his main character has a clone. So, in a way of changing the names, he calls the original "Max" and the clone "Max II." Pretty simple, right???
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