Summer Silences

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Summer Silences.


Remember that night,
Under the summer sky,
Stolen by stars,
We lay immortal.

We stood against the world,
But it was too strong for us,
I don’t see you anymore,
Since the summer died.

When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.

Now you’re a shadow,
In my mind,
Which disappears,
When I turn on the light,

And I can’t remember your face,
When it’s not in front of mine,
And I don’t like it, I don’t like it no.

When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.

I can write all the songs in the world,
But they won’t bring you back.

I can watch the stars float in the sky,
But then I’ll just waste a night.

When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.

A cigarette will kill the pain,
A different day that feels the same.

All I needs a guitar to keep me sane,
So I can play this song again.

If I could have another chance,
I wouldn’t let you go.

If I could see your face again,
I would let you know.

When the summer died,
It broke my heart to see you go.
When the summer died,
It broke my heart I thought you should know.

you can hear the accoustic version on http://www.myspace.com/ourcursemusic and we'll be recording in april
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Moved to the Lyric section for you. Lyric Poetry is slightly different :)

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This song made me both smile and cry. It was beautiful and I can see myself listening to this on my I-pod. Are you apart of a band? I visited the link and the vocals were amazing. The guitar was perfect and wow!

Hope you guys make it and keep writing wonderful songs,

~Angel

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this is beautiful!
you guys should post stuff on youtube too :D
Alone- alone- all- all- alone
Upon the wide, wide sea-
And God will not take pity on
My soul in agony!
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i'm the guitarist and song writer (the one with the hair =P)

in april we'll be recording so hopefully be making something to put on youtube =]

thanks for the reviews, this songs like, real personal to me, and having other writers like it, thanks =D

well Angel of death, when we record, i'll find a way to send you it or something =]

Eva

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