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WHERE IS THE STORY?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?! MY HEAD IS ABOUT TO EXPLODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, 'No hablo ingles.'"




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I took it down. ^^

Eek, I don't think I'm looking for any critiques on this story anymore. Or at least not on the beginning chapters. Thanks anyway for those who critiqued!

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Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

Moth and Myth <- My comic! :D



Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins