ROFL. This is hilarious, especially since the reputation snoink and teague have (well, who knows if its reputation or whatever), you two have an awesome writing talent, so this was almost unexpected from you two. I love it!
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
i second the person who said fifty evil emoticons go with this. totaly. very awkard rhyming-this is meant to be really awkward, am i write or am i right????
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i love emticons...
haha. i laughed. i clicked on it, thinking (maybe hoping?) that it was serious. but i was pleased to find out that it was a joke, and a funny one at that. great one.
I'll tell you this -
No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.
You sound like a hillbilly,
We want folk singers here.
Your poetry is truly heart-rending Teague. It reaches into the depths of our hearts and pulls at our emotions. The rhyming is amazingly powerful, and the last like just sets the whole thing off perfectly. Thank you so much for realising how I feel and putting it into words.
Epic win, Saint.
-Stel x
"Stella. You were in my dream the other night. And everyone called you Princess." -Lauren2010
Um. This isn't emo. This is wannabe emo. Just saying.
Also, the last line is NOT vaildated by artistic license, it's just stupid. The line "bread is my med" makes ABSOLUTELY no sense, along with the one before it, "I want a piece of bread."
I have nothing good to say about this poem.
Adios.
-KK
Peepsls on this website ought not to be so hatin against other writers!
It's hella hard just to post your stuff to this place, yo!
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