Nice beginning, but I agree with some of the others that it seems a little plain, or in my opinion a bit vague. I find it a little tricky to write in the narrative position, but you did a good job. I would suggest adding more about her thoughts and feelings. I wondered why she asked herself how she was going to get through... what? Well, it's the first chapter, but maybe you could explain a little more, and catch the reader's attention and make them want to keep reading. =]
"Writers make dismal lunch partners, we're always staring into space, listening to that other story..."
