God Knew

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I loved the poem! It made me tear up.
Christianity is not a religion, it's a relationship.

I may not be perfect but Jesus thinks I'm to die for.

"Let's destroy these little darlings..."- W.Beckett




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I really enjoyed this poem, I liked the way you had the rhyme scheme and I sorta've had a melody going along in my head as I read it.

Please, Keep writing more :)
Shoryu




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Hey, this is an awesome poem. I am a believer, and I think you are doing an awesome job of living out your beliefs. Back to your poem. I could really relate to this. I like how it kinda lead up to something at the end. Awesome! Keep writing.



What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
— J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye