The Fluffy Bunny Chronicles, II

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Nothing yet. I am trying to think of stuff. Do you think the Fluffy Bunny should go across the bog of desire, or through the shallow seas of shame?




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desire is to happy a word shame is beter.

and it should be shallow seas of shame becuz they all start with s but bog of desire has a word that starts with b and then a word that starts with d.

this is good writ more.

(note by Aet: See the first fluffy bunny chronicles for details. XD)
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shallow seas of shame, definitely.

Sounds more better.
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Desire should come before shame.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

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Shallow seas of shame. And make it have killer turtles.
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I vote the Plains of Rabid Proboscis (sp?) Monkeys.

This should be like, an official poll. *nod*

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well, razor, sum ppl say its proboscis, lik the dicshunairee, but i say its probohsis.
man hands on misery to man
it deepens like a coastal shelf
get out as early as you can
and don’t have any kids yourself.

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it's all gun be k




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Oooooh, I see what you're trying to accomplish. But there's "Fluffy Bread Tanka" up there too, which probably isn't a good thing.
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Heh, yeah, there is an actual point to The Fluffy Bunny!

For those who don't know, I'm messing around with making it such that any previous chapters you have to a story will show up as a table of contents. It's working now for the most part, but it's not working on all chapter stories.




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Ohhh, cool then! I was starting to think it was like "Alison"... and suddenly you lock it and say "Please give more helpful critiques in the future." :P
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get out as early as you can
and don’t have any kids yourself.

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it's all gun be k




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Does anyone else find shallow seas of shame really hard to say?
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