Ice Cubes #13

Taken down due to publishing

Oh my......that was true emotion...There were a few spelling mistakes and the word 'well' was overused at times.

I learnt loads of new stuff about the story in that post......wow.

Alainna
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Edited

Wow, that was a twist. I never knew that he had a brother. I really like that twist. As for the Chris thing, i like how it is in there but i really really hate Chris. I hope something really bad happens to him. I mean really really bad. I look forward to reading the rest of Ice cubes.

Hey, Meevs. I finally worked out all the Chapter numbers, so after this i'll be onto 15... I think lol. I only found a few things in here.

“Sure you want coffee?”

Maybe put a comma after sure? I dunno if that's right or not. xD

im sure now shut up

*I'm

And I give up. You really can bring out endless surprises. One every chapter, at least lol. We'll see how many more you've got lol.