Wow, that was a twist. I never knew that he had a brother. I really like that twist. As for the Chris thing, i like how it is in there but i really really hate Chris. I hope something really bad happens to him. I mean really really bad. I look forward to reading the rest of Ice cubes.
It doesn't think, doesn't feel. It doesn't laugh or cry. All it does from dusk 'till dawn is make the soldiers die
You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason. — Anne Lamott