Prosthesis #33 /P

Removed.

Fan side: Whoa, that was a LOT! First I hear that Kyle remembers everything and next thing you know he's shot through the stomach! I've said that I hated Dr. Haaser before but...I don't even know how to put it into words. How can he just SHOOT Kyle?! And Jon is wounded, what the hell was it that Dr. Haaser put in Jon's eye? This man needs to die, like seriously. If I could, I'd kill him myself.

Reviewer side: This was great! Tons of action and not even too quick! It was all well plotted out and I loved the ending (though it made me choke and I had to reread it again) Everything I'm finding out is just popping in my head right now. Not one dull thing has happened and everything is so important and relating. I love it! Dr. Haaser is an interesting character and I'm glad to find more about him finally, I KNEW he had to be some sort of phoney. The way he talked to Jon made me want to slap him and pin HIM in that chair. He was treating Jon like he was seriously crazy, only showing that he was the crazy one. I loved it!

*Is sad* I hope Kyle is still alive. , Jon can't just figure out that Kyle was fine and then have him die. That could destroy him and I want so much for Jon to feel better and get out of this place.

**Now that you've seen my bipolar view I need to read more! I really really hope that Kyle survives!

~Rieda

NO, NO, NO!

I mean, how can you do that? How is it that you can grow a character so well, make your readers fall in love with him and become attached to him, and then give your readers the best possible moment in the whole story line, and then kill him?

A gun shot wound to the stomach?! Man! I highly doubt they're going to help him out there, which means he's dead. But he can't die! I mean, JEEZ! You led me to believe it was safe to get attached to these characters, and then you kill Kyle! I mean, jeez! He was my favorite character! I had to read it all again just to get it through my head that you killed my character.

But at the same time, I'm so attached to Jon! How is he going to take this? What's going to happen? What's he going to do? Gah! I want to cry, but at the same time, my head is buzzing around with this cliff hanger. I'm going to go mad if you don't post the next one soon!

And yet, I realize that this is good. I guess you want us to be feeling this way.

The Others? Jon, this isn’t LOST.

ha haha oh goodness...that reminds me of our conversations. Beautiful!!!

*gasprifigous* OMFG BRAD! *dies of excitement* ehhh this is too much!


I'm so confused and enjoy it!! You amaze me.