Introduction to "Dennis"

this story has been added to and revised, please look at "Dennis Part None"

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This was a real pleasure to read. I found it funny and Dennis has an unusual charm about him. Granted, I'd never want to meet such an unlucky person but I love hearing (and reading) about these sorts of people.

The only thing I could say is double spacing your paragraphs would be a good idea. I knew when they began and ended, but it would make reading your story easier since tabs don't work on fourms.

I can't wait to read the next installment though!

Hehehe, this is excellent. It's satirical and funny. It reminded me of Barry Trotter in many ways, especially the footnotes.

Keep it up, I'd like to see more of Dennis. =D

Your writing reminds me of Terry Pratchett so much. I enoyed reading this. made me chuckle a happy chuckle.

Look forward to more.