This was great! Jon is sadly...breaking. It seems as though he won't last much longer. At first this therapy was helping him now, it's desroying him!
He's having a lot of feelings that I've never seen from him before and his responces are taking me by surprise. I hate Dr. Haaser for doing this to him, but he is such a wonderful character.
And then we go into electroshock therapy, which is my favorite kind of minipulative therapy! He'll speak aloud correct? While being zapped by a small bit of electricity at the temple. I think that's how it happens anyway. Oh, I can't wait for the next! Awesome job on this Brad, I'm feeling major character changes and developments!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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