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Rosendorn · 2017-03-02T02:43:03Z

Been awhile since I had one of these. I will review: - Poetry - Novels — Chapter 1's or chapter whatevers, no summary required - Short stories - Ideas — link me to your project thread and I'll give it a look over - Querries All ratings accepted. I prefer not to review: - Horror - Sci fi - Spiritual - Anything with vampires - Anything with cult-like groups/actual cults - Anything with zombies/parasites - Completed start to finish manuscripts Please do not request more than one chapter of a novel at a time, unless you are alright with me potentially jumping in fresh every chapter. I generally stop reading works when I get bored/have enough material for a review, which can sometimes be at the end of the work, but is more often than not somewhere in the middle. I will also stop short stories when I get bored/have enough material for a review. I don't work on "it gets better later." People will not get to later unless "now" is good. I am 100% fine expanding upon anything I put in my reviews if anything is confusing, or I didn't cover something you wanted me to! If you want comments on something in a part I didn't review, then I'll happily toss in a few opinions. Priority goes to works with 0-2 reviews. I will not review prose that has over 5 reviews on it and poetry that has over 7, unless you give me something really specific that other reviewers haven't covered. A Like on a post indicates I have reviewed the work in question.

Rosendorn

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Wed Jan 03, 2018 8:16 am

Rosendorn says... · Wed Jan 03, 2018 8:16 am

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A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.

keystrings

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Fri Jan 05, 2018 6:20 am

keystrings says... · Fri Jan 05, 2018 6:20 am

Hi! I’d really appreciate any sort of feedback for this poem: where did we go wrong?

If you want to or can, please take all the time you want, since it’s kind of long XD. Or at least looks long to me. Thank you so much!

name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs

novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)

Apricity

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Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:26 pm

Apricity says... · Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:26 pm

If you've got time Rosey :3, I would love for you to take a look at this. It's been a while since I've written shorts and I wanna get as much feedback as I can before I try out the anthology thing.

Thank you!

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canopy

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Sat Jul 11, 2026 4:23 am

canopy says... · Sat Jul 11, 2026 4:23 am

Hello there! I am canopy, a Res & Comm crew mod, and I am locking and moving your thread to the WRFF Archive as your thread has not been active in a very long time. We do this to keep our forums up to date. Should you ever want to reopen your thread please feel free to reach out any Res & Comm crew mod and we'll happy to help you out!

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