Of Wizardy and Witchcraft

Hey, I'm back! I'm trying to be active again, so here I am, offering reviews for you guys.

This time, I would accept 1 request a time. The way this works is that as long as the first request has not been completed yet, no other request would be accepted.

At a time, I accept:

1 first-chapter novel request
1 short story request
1 poem request

If I haven't finished my short story request, another short story request will not be accepted. Same goes short story and poem. Also, I retain the right to reject a request without giving any reason, or to not apply the rules I have made.

Without further ado, do request!

Added rules: Novel chapter that is more than 3k words will not be entertained.

Could I please request a review on Faint Etches?

Rated 18+ for language and violence.

Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering

@fraey: Request accepted! It would take a while before I do it, though. No promise!

@wetumbrella6: Request rejected. Check the first post to know why. Also, the chapter is too long. I suggest to shorten it to 3k.

1 temporary slot open for novel chapter of any number review request.

Hey there, Lightsong! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!