Will review poetry for pizza and wings

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Hey, I am an old YWSer, and I like poetry. Let me review your poetry and I will give my two cents on how to improve. Ranging from books to read to general advice.
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html




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Hey silented! :)

I wrote this poem (Music). If you're still doing reviews and would be open to checking it out, I'd love any kind of feedback. I'm still pretty new to poetry, so any advice is appreciated.

Also, do you have any favorite poetry books, poems, or poets that you'd recommend to me? I'd like to read more poetry but I don't know where I should start.




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If food is poetry, is not poetry also food?
— Joyce Carol Oates