An excellent first step into NaPo! I hope you join us again next year Isbah, you've got some strong poems here. One of my favorites was where you described in heavy-detail the rain on the window - very poetic and just creates a whole scene as you read. Hope to read more of your poetry soon, thanks for sharing your work this April!
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it. — Aldous Huxley, Brave New World