The silliest poem in the world

I was bored so I was thinking of funny stuff and this is what I came up with:

Dearly Beloved,
we are gathered here today to
say our goodbyes.
I regret that our dear friend is dead.
It's a shame that a coconut fell on her head.


PS. IF you like...you can add on to it. This could be fun.

Yes i know it is stupid but that's the point.

Hahahahaa. You should put this in "Writing Activities" maybe, and we can all add a couple of lines or something

Very funny.

this truly is pointless. I know that was your intent, but please write with a meaning to. It isn't a bad poem. Just please keep that in mind.

piepiemann22 wrote:this truly is pointless. I know that was your intent, but please write with a meaning to. It isn't a bad poem. Just please keep that in mind.

Poems' don't have to have a point piepiemann22. They can be just for fun, as this one was most likely made for.

Yea, it should be put in writing activities :p it'd be lots of fun to see what other people come up with.

Only one thing, the random rhyming was a tad odd, it doesn't rhyme for the first few lines and then out of nowhere you start doing it ( I just find that a little odd ).

Fun to read, easy on the eyes, nice job.

Sorry, I take poetry to heart. That may be why I said that. That's just how I feel. It is only an oppinion.

This poem is truly brilliant.

As for adding? I'm too lazy for that, BUT! I think, if you're going to add on to it, I would add it on here:

we are gathered here today to
say our goodbyes.

And I would make it rhyme. Part of the silliness of this is the last two lines, which have a ridiculous rhyme. So I would continue that, with the exception of the "Dearly Beloved/We are gathered here today" lines. Because that's so clichéd, it's funny.

And... there's something funky with the last two lines, as far as rhyming goes. Hmmm...

Anyway, hope that helps!

*Rolling in laughter*
I enjoyed writing it and hoped others liked reading it. I posted it for the purpose of making people laugh and I see that it worked. I think I am going to put it in writing activities to see what I get. I made a couple more that I plan on posting. Ridiculous, I know, but hey, it's funny.

haha. i like it but its too short. WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


oh and piepieman (lol, love the name) lighten up a little. god! poetry can actually be fun. its not all depressing emotions and dramatic events! like that poem from that guy about a guy eating custard when hes flustard. its funny, not emo! tsk tsk.

your poem is as funny and straightforward as your avatar.

*laughing* (you should hear a cat laugh...it's funny)