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Hey Lucrezia! I hoping you could drop a review on my work Inciting Incident p1. It's been sitting in the green room for a few days, so I've been wanting some feedback before I publish the next part.
Thank you for your help!
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Hiya! I was wondering if you'd be alright with reviewing the recent chapters of my story Wakefield, Wyoming? It's only 4 chapters in, but it's up to you how you want to review (if you even want to, of course)! I don't really have much to say besides that. I just think you'd be good for reviewing it (and I'm a bit shy to ask other strangers but I'm working on it)

Here's the link to the most recent chapter :)
Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 4.
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My Introduction for my novel. Does it hook you into wanting to read further?

Please.
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.




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Thank you!
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.



Pain is filtered in a poem so that it becomes finally, in the end, pleasure.
— Mark Strand